“Carving in Possibilities” uses layers of text to convey the core meaning of the piece of work, the sculpture of David by Michelangelo. The process of building a skyscraper is very similar and can serve as an analogy. First off, as Larsen does with her E-Lit, the process of building a skyscraper must begin with a well thought-out plan. Calvino mentions this as one of the three core values of exactitude. Once the plan is laid out, all the areas of specialty must combine to build the towering building. Like the text does for Larsen, engineers, architects, etc. must combine to complete the project. The real representation of exactitude comes in the actually building of the skyscraper. The workers must use the least amount of resources and time to build the building but must keep up with the codes implied. Literature is held to this same standard. The author must use the least amount of words to describe the overall meaning of the piece of work.
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Calvino expresses Exactitude very well in his book, “Six Memos for the New Millennium“. When looking for a distinct piece of E-Lit to best display the element of exactitude, I find myself looking to “Carving in Possibilities” by Deena Larsen. This is a piece that uses the sculpture of David by Michelangelo. The picture is very blurry when the viewer first opens the E-Lit. As you move your mouse over David; phrases that David said, potential phrases that were mentioned by the viewers of David vs. Goliath, phrases stated by the sculptor himself, as well as phrases from the crowd who view the sculpture, all begin to carve out the picture until it is as clear as if you were there with the sculpture. The piece of E-Lit conveys the thought of exactitude because it uses the simplest form of communication, a phrase, to “carve out” the final product, the picture of David. The author, Larsen, does a great job of using well planned yet simple processes to convey the overall core of the work, the sculpture of David. As Calvino mentioned, exactitude is crucial when looking to convey a meaning, Deena Larsen does this very well in “Carving in Possibilities“.
“To my mind exactitude means three things above all:
“The crystal, with its precise faceting and its ability to refract light, is the model of perfection that I have always cherished as an emblem, and its predilection has become even more meaningful since we have learned that certain properties of the birth and growth of crystals resemble those of the most rudimentary biological creatures, forming a kind of bridge between the mineral world and living matter.”
Here, quoting from the same book, Calvino discusses the emblem he selected for exactitude. He selects a crystal because it takes white light and is able to reflect it into the visual light spectrum. It takes something simple and is able to show it in its most complicated form through an exact process. Calvino also brings up that now that we know how complicated and exact the process is for creating a crystal, it is even more relatable. He explains that for literature to be exact it must be well planned and thought-out, like the process of crystallizing.
Calvino looks to better explain his concept by using a mentor of his. Giorgio de Santillana was considered by Calvino as a guide for him while he was in America. Santillana does a famous lecture in which he discusses the Egyptian’s emblem for the element of exactitude. They believed it was represented by Maat, the goddess of scales. They represented her as “a feather that served as a weight on scales used for the weighing of souls”.
While discussing Calvino’s exactitude, a famous haiku I studied in a Poetry Workshop class comes to mind. The haiku, “The Solider” by Udiah, conveys the thought of exactitude Calvino mentions. A haiku is intended to convey the thought of the author through a process of three lines, broken down to a 5-7-5 syllable count. This is about as exact as it gets. “The Solider” uses the thought of fallen soldiers, something that many would consider a deep thought, needing a lot of words to convey the real feeling that associates with the death of soldiers. Udiah, a famous author of Haikus, is able to convey the feelings and thoughts of fallen solders with just 17 syllables. This shows that exactitude, as Calvino mentions, is a powerful quality of literature.
Fighting for freedom,
Fall of a valiant soldier
Resting in the Lord